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Person 1

Image choices- 
I think that only having two photos is less of a distraction and lets you see the photos properly.
I think that the bigger image stands out more and makes it look more important.
Having the smaller image in black and white makes it look more interesting because then the whole contents page isn't in colour.
Colour scheme-
The colour scheme is good.
I think that pink and dark blue go well together.
Text-
It's obvious what the subheadings are because of the bold text.
There's a range texts (bold, regular, italic)
Title-
The title is big and bold and stands out.
Because the title is bold, it's clear that it's the contents page and because it's at the top.
Other-
I like the separate part for 'the women' as it gives extra stories.
Changes you'd make-
Make the subheadings bold and a different colour- this will make it stand out a lot more and look better with the pink and blue.

Person 2


Image choices- 
I think you should of used more images and put image numbers on the photos to make it easy to find where it is in the magazine.
Colour scheme-
I like how there's only two colours as it doesn't overload it with too many.
Text-
I like how there's a range of different kinds of text as in bold and italic.
Title-
Clear, bold and stands out.
Other-
N/A
Changes you'd make-
More photos and numbers on photos.

Person 3


Image choices- 
I really like that there's only 2 images because it makes it simple and easy to see what's what. It also gives more room for more text so you can see more of what would be in the magazine. You could of put a photo of a boy in as well as there's no photo's of boys in your magazine- this would of been a good place to do so.
Colour scheme-
Good and simple.
Text-
Good and clear.
Title-
Good and bold.
Other-
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Changes you'd make-
Don't make all your models girls.