I like how the big image is in colour but the others aren't. It creates interest in the page.
Instead of making the name blue, make the entire title blue and add a black drop shadow to make it easier to read.
I like how you've kept all of the starting lines of text the same height even though there's room to go up.
Either put a quote in the space above the last column or to the left of the main image.
Person 2:
It looks good but make the font further down to give you more room.
Person 3:
I like the images and the main images. The lines across the page looks good. I think in the space that's left, you should add either more text or a quote from the interview- but not an image and there's already a lot on the page and might look odd.
All of the people I asked to give me feedback said they think that there's too much space around the text. I want to add more text and put a quote under the last photo as well. Person 1 said they didn't like the heading and when asking other people to view it and say what they thought, they all agreed that it didn't flow as much as it could. Also, there's no relation between the page and the 2 different colours. I want to make the name of the girl both pink (to link to the questions) and shorter.
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